Oh wow. That was incredible - edge-of-the-seat tense! I adore tales of survival and tactics, and I loved all of John's ingenious traps, as well as the ticking clock with the team's radiation exposure. Every time I thought it couldn't get any more tense, you found a way to crank up the tension! I also loved the banter and support and friendship, which you always do so well, and John and Rodney playing the farming game at the end - yeah, I can see how shooter-games would have lost their appeal at this point! This was really just fantastic. :D
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