Oh I have little to add to all the reviews above, because they're so right, this fic is brilliant! I love Shep in military mode but even more when he actually complements with brains. Makes him irresistible :P
I also loved your villiant Gene, I think a guy like him is one of my worst nightmares ever!!! the good think is that you finished him properly and realistic. My favorite part was the moment he smash John's ribs. Wow that was so cold and freaking!
Thanks. and, as the first girl in comments said, please don't stop writting.:D
saludos
steve austin