Wow. That just blew my mind away! The action, tension, suspense, ruthless nemesis, great team interaction, bamf!John; all of these elements just made for the prefect fic.

John's pain and guilt at losing everyone but Radek from that first team is palpable and I did like the start and end scenes with John and Rodney first trying to create the "perfect soldier" then deciding that a farming game was much better. It made for a nice closing scene.

Thank you!