Thank you. It was tough to go from the desert to Atlantis and I tried to put some sensory imagery that would just pop out to those accustomed to a certain environment, especially the clean, crisp feel of the city and her people. The ability to drink water, clean sheets and skin, noise and sounds would be unnerving I think.
Chapters 14 and 15 were so interconnected in terms of pace and build that I went ahead and posted them both. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the nuances to this one.
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Chapters 14 and 15 were so interconnected in terms of pace and build that I went ahead and posted them both. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the nuances to this one.
As always you are awesome!