That was an awesome story and a wonderful read! You've done such a fine job with it! The plot is perfect, and riveting, Danny's growing anxiety when he sees the videos, the sense of urgency, the complications with Khalid and Noshimori... And also, fantastic dialogues, suprises, and a great ending.
I loved the image Danny had of Gracie exulting with glee while doing a high kick - so cute! Love Steve with Grace, very in character and very moving! Kudos for the great work and thanks a lot for sharing!