ext_2553 ([identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kristen999 2007-10-18 08:44 am (UTC)

I really enjoyed this. I liked the disjointed, switching back and forth from the class to the accident to the present - it worked really well for Ronon's state of mind, and the determination and edge of despair were so effective. Great stuff.
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