John is running deep in the city, hears and sound and follows it the floor breaks apart, he tries to hold on to the edge but he can't for too long and he falls, sensors are done because of structural damage and atlantis who is always aware of Johns presence feel the void left by him and is looking for him, alarms go off, atlantis knows he is in trouble and its trying in its onw way to get him help. oh..People don't notice right away he is missing because he was suppose be on the main line and I don't know...they can't comunicate with the mainland to call him for the emergency, or they don't think much of it to call him at the begining?
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ok..just in case.
John is running deep in the city, hears and sound and follows it the floor breaks apart, he tries to hold on to the edge but he can't for too long and he falls, sensors are done because of structural damage and atlantis who is always aware of Johns presence feel the void left by him and is looking for him, alarms go off, atlantis knows he is in trouble and its trying in its onw way to get him help.
oh..People don't notice right away he is missing because he was suppose be on the main line and I don't know...they can't comunicate with the mainland to call him for the emergency, or they don't think much of it to call him at the begining?
what do you think?