Beautifully written story. It goes from a feeling of harsh conditions to a feeling of family, team, togetherness and hope. I loved the sensuality of the scene with Teyla and John. Suitably hot together in the bath house!
I, like a lot of others, wish the series could have had more romance for Sheppard and the possibilities with Teyla could and should have been exploited. However, this is flogging the old horse of what could have and should have been - so thanks to you for showing this relationship beautifully.