Yay! Perfect! Vegas screamed and cried for a real ending. This fits perfectly into the episode. Love how you wove the comments and lyrics into John's recovery. First being that someone actually went after him. I was yelling at the television, at Rodney to scan the area, "Hey, Rodney, what about Sheppard?" This hits the spot. Full of emotion and introspection and yay, team! Thank you for putting Ronon and Teyla in there. Love the last sentence, just the right ending. Thank you very much! Now, can we film this? *g*
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Date: 2009-01-03 03:14 am (UTC)