Loved this story. The twist on "Sheppard activates Ancient tech" to "Teyla activates Wraith tech" was absolutely ingenious. I don't think I've seen that anywhere else either. Very cool. The descent into insanity for all of them, but especially Sheppard was intense. I loved how you showed them slowly getting lost in their own minds. McKay's was hilarious to me - trying to perfect that golf game and not working on anything else (and being excited and happy constantly). And then Sheppard listening to the voices in his head and trying desperately to keep it together, but not keeping it together and cutting his own arm when Ronon finally caught up with him...Wow. I was totally caught up in this story. Great read.
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Date: 2009-01-10 05:47 am (UTC)