Gosh, I'm not even sure where to begin. Everyone was perfect, as always. The whole plot was great - the supersoldier hunting John while the rest of his team tries desperately to get to him and to get themselves away from the radiation. I loved the way John used his head and strategy to keep ahead of Gene.
"Good luck running on stumps, asshole." That was my favorite line. I can hear John saying that in my head because it is so him. And the details on Parker were a special treat. Made him more real and the loss more traumatic. Oh and Rodney fussing at John because he was making napalm right after being unable to get a door open - that was a hoot.
The increasing tension as the stakes went higher and higher and John's stamina began faltering was just amazing. I couldn't read fast enough. Fantabulous job!!
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Date: 2010-01-06 12:29 am (UTC)"Good luck running on stumps, asshole." That was my favorite line. I can hear John saying that in my head because it is so him. And the details on Parker were a special treat. Made him more real and the loss more traumatic. Oh and Rodney fussing at John because he was making napalm right after being unable to get a door open - that was a hoot.
The increasing tension as the stakes went higher and higher and John's stamina began faltering was just amazing. I couldn't read fast enough. Fantabulous job!!