Date: 2010-01-06 09:09 am (UTC)
saphirablue: (Jumper)
From: [personal profile] saphirablue
Good story! :)

I like the idea of a "Super-Soldier" hunting John and John being able to defeat this soldier using his brains and not superior weapons. Yeah, he killed him with weapons/bombs but he had to come up with an idea for this weapons/bombs and had to built them.

I really like your description of the exhaustion of John - the burning legs, the aches, the tiredness. :)

Oh, and I love the scene in the facility when the team + Zelenka huddels together to share the warmth. =)

Thank you for this story!
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