Wow. That just blew my mind away! The action, tension, suspense, ruthless nemesis, great team interaction, bamf!John; all of these elements just made for the prefect fic.
John's pain and guilt at losing everyone but Radek from that first team is palpable and I did like the start and end scenes with John and Rodney first trying to create the "perfect soldier" then deciding that a farming game was much better. It made for a nice closing scene.
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Date: 2011-06-03 05:11 am (UTC)John's pain and guilt at losing everyone but Radek from that first team is palpable and I did like the start and end scenes with John and Rodney first trying to create the "perfect soldier" then deciding that a farming game was much better. It made for a nice closing scene.
Thank you!