It's harder with the written word to get those subtle expressions and silent communication down, but I have done that in other areas of the story. Body language. Mannerisms. Silence. Stilted conversations. lol
This scene they need to talk....doesn't mean a lot, but the words will come I think. I tweaked another scene and I think helped pave the way.
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Date: 2010-03-10 09:55 pm (UTC)This scene they need to talk....doesn't mean a lot, but the words will come I think. I tweaked another scene and I think helped pave the way.