I love how John's survival skill has caught the attention of the local political forces. Nice use of both the culture and that determination we love about Shep, even if he's not happy with himself, heh. You mentioned layers and details in your update - that work shines through in these scenes/chapters!
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Date: 2010-07-22 03:41 am (UTC)