I can't express enough how much I'm enjoying this story! It's so compelling and totally addictive!
I like Ronon hitting Shep a lot! That works well and shows you understand Ronon and how he'd deal with things really well. It's sort of a reversal of canonic roles that Ronon seems to be being the sensible one here whilst John is being reckless and losing sight of reality. Sheppard is the one thinking with his fist here, while Ronon seems to be the logical thinker for a change; he's taking a back seat and looking at the game plan, while Sheppard is totally caught up in the moment. I loved Ronon working through his great pain to teach John some fighting techniques. They're both injured and in pain, yet they just beat the crap out of each other. Out of necessisity, yes, but I feel that's who both those men are, to a certain extent.
I do like Malvick. I don't know who he is and whether he can be trusted or not. I do find it intriguing that he saved Sheppard from a grisly fate!
Nice to see some Shep backstory here. It enriches the story very much! Can't wait for more. :)
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Date: 2010-06-25 11:11 pm (UTC)I like Ronon hitting Shep a lot! That works well and shows you understand Ronon and how he'd deal with things really well. It's sort of a reversal of canonic roles that Ronon seems to be being the sensible one here whilst John is being reckless and losing sight of reality. Sheppard is the one thinking with his fist here, while Ronon seems to be the logical thinker for a change; he's taking a back seat and looking at the game plan, while Sheppard is totally caught up in the moment. I loved Ronon working through his great pain to teach John some fighting techniques. They're both injured and in pain, yet they just beat the crap out of each other. Out of necessisity, yes, but I feel that's who both those men are, to a certain extent.
I do like Malvick. I don't know who he is and whether he can be trusted or not. I do find it intriguing that he saved Sheppard from a grisly fate!
Nice to see some Shep backstory here. It enriches the story very much! Can't wait for more. :)