I've been really busy the last couple of days and I was DESPERATE to read this!!!
I'm so relieved that Ronon found John - I hoped he would! When Visser was killed, I thought they were in such trouble! Malvick? Hmmm, he saves the day again - but he worries me. I could be wrong here, but I just don't trust him. He makes me suspicious and I worry for John and Ronon when he's around. You've done an incredibly well to build such a sense of suspense around him here, but I can't help but ask who is this person and what does he really want from John and Ronon? I just can't help but think it can't be good for them. But maybe it's my suspicious nature? I can't wait for more! Oh, I see there is more! HEHE! :D
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Date: 2010-07-04 07:44 pm (UTC)I'm so relieved that Ronon found John - I hoped he would! When Visser was killed, I thought they were in such trouble! Malvick? Hmmm, he saves the day again - but he worries me. I could be wrong here, but I just don't trust him. He makes me suspicious and I worry for John and Ronon when he's around. You've done an incredibly well to build such a sense of suspense around him here, but I can't help but ask who is this person and what does he really want from John and Ronon? I just can't help but think it can't be good for them. But maybe it's my suspicious nature? I can't wait for more! Oh, I see there is more! HEHE! :D