Okay, I'll bring my pail and shovel and try this part of the sandbox today.
This was awesome. It was heartbreaking, and hopeful, and hot, and tender all at the same time. Absolutely believable. You managed to create a complete world in relatively few words. I adored your vision of who the characters had become over time and circumstance which stayed very true to who they were.
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Date: 2010-08-06 12:57 am (UTC)This was awesome. It was heartbreaking, and hopeful, and hot, and tender all at the same time. Absolutely believable. You managed to create a complete world in relatively few words. I adored your vision of who the characters had become over time and circumstance which stayed very true to who they were.