Date: 2010-08-06 04:36 pm (UTC)
rhianona: (John and Teyla)
From: [personal profile] rhianona
Gorgeous. I love how you set the scene, showing us just what has happened without a long explanation. And when Teyla tells us what did happen, it makes perfect sense. Lovely use of words to convey the scene and their inner strength at withstanding everything and anything and willing to stand and fight, even if that means hiding until they can act.

Also, love the team interaction in this.
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