Thank you, thank you, thank you! You gave me everything I asked. This is the Sheppard and team that I know and love. Sheppard, the competent military commander who has the respect and dare I say love, (in the way a brother does)of his men. Stroke of genius on how to introduce the poison. Very glad the "pretty" was not harmed in the writing of this fic;) It was non stop from the get go, just the way I like it. And just to add the icing on the cake, the humour and snark.....guh.
"I'll give you all my porn if you get us out of here,” Blake encourages McKay.
“Don't need it. Got my own.”
and
“Lock them out!”
“No, really?” Rodney snaps.
Your OC's were a great addition too. It was awesome how you can create individual characters with just a couple of details.
Blake runs over, wiping strands of his matted dirty blond hair from his sweaty forehead, smacking gum in a nervous habit. He's John's age and build, a self-proclaimed farm boy who waits on his CO's command with eagerness. “Sir, what's the plan?”
All eyes are on John for his next command, and he signals for a wedge to column formation.
The military detail is one thing that I really appreciate. Atlantis and it's military personel are an intricate part of the expediton. In other words, a mother load of story ideas and you nailed it.
It is all these details that make this a wonderfully crafted story and it's mine, all mine. "My precious....." :D
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Date: 2010-09-18 03:17 am (UTC)Sheppard, the competent military commander who has the respect and dare I say love, (in the way a brother does)of his men. Stroke of genius on how to introduce the poison. Very glad the "pretty" was not harmed in the writing of this fic;) It was non stop from the get go, just the way I like it. And just to add the icing on the cake, the humour and snark.....guh.
"I'll give you all my porn if you get us out of here,” Blake encourages McKay.
“Don't need it. Got my own.”
and
“Lock them out!”
“No, really?” Rodney snaps.
Your OC's were a great addition too. It was awesome how you can create individual characters with just a couple of details.
Blake runs over, wiping strands of his matted dirty blond hair from his sweaty forehead, smacking gum in a nervous habit. He's John's age and build, a self-proclaimed farm boy who waits on his CO's command with eagerness. “Sir, what's the plan?”
All eyes are on John for his next command, and he signals for a wedge to column formation.
The military detail is one thing that I really appreciate. Atlantis and it's military personel are an intricate part of the expediton. In other words, a mother load of story ideas and you nailed it.
It is all these details that make this a wonderfully crafted story and it's mine, all mine. "My precious....." :D