WOW! Teyla!POV! OC!Marines who are capable of handling Ronon and survive the fic! Rodney snark! Carson in full medical mode! soldier!John! getting burned by chemicals and fearing for his eyes!John - this story is perfect! =)
I was squeeing the moment I started reading this fic! It's great! There are so many great and awesome things in it! :)
I especially love the Teyla POV, the OC Marines who see John hurt and help to help him and that you let John fear for his eyes (even if it was not the "main" hurt) - that's just the favourite hurt!John for me! Thank you so much for including this!
For a minute I really thought that you will let John die. :(
I love the scenes in the infirmary - the high Rodney and Ronon refusing to have surgery as well as John briefly waking up and thanking Teyla (and all the others) for saving him!
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Date: 2010-09-18 07:10 am (UTC)I was squeeing the moment I started reading this fic! It's great! There are so many great and awesome things in it! :)
I especially love the Teyla POV, the OC Marines who see John hurt and help to help him and that you let John fear for his eyes (even if it was not the "main" hurt) - that's just the favourite hurt!John for me! Thank you so much for including this!
For a minute I really thought that you will let John die. :(
I love the scenes in the infirmary - the high Rodney and Ronon refusing to have surgery as well as John briefly waking up and thanking Teyla (and all the others) for saving him!
Thank you so, so, so, so much for this fic!