I imagine this section was difficult to write for several reasons. You did a great job with both the emotions of the scenes - especially Rodney yelling a Ten - and seeing some of Shep's attitude reflected back - and incorporating a lot of medical/science info.
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Date: 2011-01-22 05:00 am (UTC)