Wonderful story. Excellent John voice. He would take the whole city on his shoulders and push through the pain, though it was good to see him delegating. Liked how you took us on the journey through the city, seeing the unusual happenings on Atlantis and meeting new characters. Love the team looking out for John, especially Ronon not taking any lip. I like seeing John taking care of his people and empathizing with their pain/problems. Great idea for team building - robot wars! Good job of showing John's slow recovery and the drudgery/responsibility of being the boss.
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Date: 2011-03-08 02:58 am (UTC)