Can I second estefee's thoughts? OMG, gripping, thrilling beginning. Love the details of the raid, the geography and wildlife of the islets and of course, the stealth and precision as Steve went into full SEAL mode hunting down and eliminating the bad guys to rescue his team. I love seeing Steve's badass side, the full military mindset as he focuses on his objective, yet fights his to keep his emotions at bay.
Wonderfully tense scene as Danny is set for execution and Steve stages the rescue. Wow! Good job of escalating the suspense by showing the patrols and the radio check ins. Nice job of highlighting that these were professional mercs; that these guys were now hunting Steve and Danny. Great voices, like Danny's reaction and his insistence of going with Steve yet knowing when to keep his mouth shut. Great story, so so happy that I can go to part 2 immediately!
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Date: 2011-05-08 08:02 pm (UTC)Wonderfully tense scene as Danny is set for execution and Steve stages the rescue. Wow! Good job of escalating the suspense by showing the patrols and the radio check ins. Nice job of highlighting that these were professional mercs; that these guys were now hunting Steve and Danny. Great voices, like Danny's reaction and his insistence of going with Steve yet knowing when to keep his mouth shut. Great story, so so happy that I can go to part 2 immediately!