holy wow, is all I have to say. this grabbed me by the throat and the heart and just shook me all around and squeezed me. and then put me to bed under a blankee all squished and happy afterward. I don't know how you did that.
“Excuse me?” Danny wipes away the sweat at his brow. “Are you delirious? I was only kidding earlier about the--” --- “Yeah, I knew your twisted mind could appreciate the overkill.”
and made me laugh, too. I just *knew* Chin and Kono would get loose. I shouted for joy when they came charging in. But when Kono had Steve's back? And he *knew* it? And that Chin and Danny would take care of things? I got all wibbly. I wibbled all *OVER* the place.
I loved the flashback scene and the bit on the beach, and such tactile imagery here:
The noise of chopper blades morph into shouts of orders, desperate voices dulling into soothing ones. Then everything descends into a placid calm, like the silence beneath the ocean.
and the ending was just perfect, really.
babe, this was so amazing. now I'm off to go read it like, five more times. :))))
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Date: 2011-05-08 07:20 am (UTC)“Excuse me?” Danny wipes away the sweat at his brow. “Are you delirious? I was only kidding earlier about the--”
---
“Yeah, I knew your twisted mind could appreciate the overkill.”
and made me laugh, too. I just *knew* Chin and Kono would get loose. I shouted for joy when they came charging in. But when Kono had Steve's back? And he *knew* it? And that Chin and Danny would take care of things? I got all wibbly. I wibbled all *OVER* the place.
I loved the flashback scene and the bit on the beach, and such tactile imagery here:
The noise of chopper blades morph into shouts of orders, desperate voices dulling into soothing ones. Then everything descends into a placid calm, like the silence beneath the ocean.
and the ending was just perfect, really.
babe, this was so amazing. now I'm off to go read it like, five more times. :))))
<3 <3 <3