Oh, this was magnificent! It had plot and an actual storyline and depth and characterizations! We don't get too many real stories in this fandom, let alone one this well written. (I can't tell you how excited I was to see something over 1500k!)
Your use of the military background was superb and the details really made it!! (And at the risk of ticking you off, in case you like her character, THANK YOU for not including Jenna Kaye in this story. I like my team to have the original four!)
Thank you so much for sharing this, I was really entertained.
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
no subject
Date: 2011-05-09 01:59 am (UTC)Your use of the military background was superb and the details really made it!! (And at the risk of ticking you off, in case you like her character, THANK YOU for not including Jenna Kaye in this story. I like my team to have the original four!)
Thank you so much for sharing this, I was really entertained.
I will certainly read again.