Um, um good! What a great way to start the morning. Loved that this story had such a fresh and new approach to it. Agonized every step of the way up that mountain right along with John. Great how you managed to convey the narrow single mindedness of having to keep going up that mountain. Great job!
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Date: 2011-08-01 02:44 pm (UTC)