Whew! This had me holding my breath until I realized what I was doing! Very intense!
I loved the creeping disorientation you created during the climb up the coral, and how John kept using things to help him determine which way to go. Eerie and terrifying at the same time--excellent story!
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Date: 2011-08-02 09:42 pm (UTC)I loved the creeping disorientation you created during the climb up the coral, and how John kept using things to help him determine which way to go. Eerie and terrifying at the same time--excellent story!