Why thank you so much!! I admit that those feverish Steve on the beach scenes pushed all kinds of buttons for me. I used them as a reward for writing the slower parts.
I never know how these denser stories will turn out and I'm glad the emotion is still there because that's what I strive for.
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Date: 2011-09-28 08:54 pm (UTC)I never know how these denser stories will turn out and I'm glad the emotion is still there because that's what I strive for.