I'm exhausted reading this! Good plot line and very descriptive details. Enjoyed that Lorne came to get Shep and could coax him back to the infirmary. Nice touch showing John's confusion upon waking, "Is everyone alright?" Lorne retrieving sweats and reassuring Sheppard further bolstered the richness of the story. Good job!
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Date: 2007-10-12 02:15 am (UTC)