The characters are perfect and the imagery is wonderful. Loved their card playing and arm wrestling and that Ronon was looking out for Sheppard. Also loved Sheppard counting cards - making good use of those math abilities. You did a great job with Ronon questioning Sheppard about being fed on by the Wraith - very intense. I can't wait to read more because this is fantastic, as always.
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
no subject
Date: 2007-11-25 06:00 am (UTC)