Awesome chapter. Through your words, I could feel the frustration and impotence that Ronon was feeling. That first sentence is powerful. Great job of layering the raw emotions and the physical pain in a hellish setting. Poetic justice that Lars releases the safety and has no idea of the recoil and conditions into which he is firing, sealing his own doom. Love how Ronon showed no mercy or remorse to Turesh and it is because of Sheppard, not so much Sateda at that point. Loved your description of Ronon going from the macabre (finding Sheppard's body) to the realization, hope and determination upon discovering that he was still alive. Love this, already waiting for the next chapter.
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Date: 2007-11-30 02:17 am (UTC)