Fantastic ending and wrap up. Good job showing Ronon's guilt and his refusal to be treated until he know how Sheppard is. Love the image of him taking over the infirmary and learning all the meds and machines and making sure Sheppard gets the proper attention. The line, “Didn't kill him for them,” is perfect. Great scene in Ronon's room between him and Shep. The dialog is perfect - the apology/guilt, forgiveness and humor are just right.
I love the whole story. Excellent plot, writing, characterization and execution. Good job! Thank you.
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Date: 2007-12-02 05:21 am (UTC)I love the whole story. Excellent plot, writing, characterization and execution. Good job! Thank you.