"Mea Culpa" (1/1)

[kristen999]

Title: Mea Culpa
Author: Kristen999
Prompt: Illegal
Rating: T
Spoilers: Season 4 Before “Missing”
Warnings: Violence/Slight Language
Summary: Rodney and Ronon are captured by another galactic mad man. Sheppard and Teyla try not to self-destruct while attempting to find them. A little dark.

Notes: Written for the sga_genficathon.

Thank you to everybetty andwildcat88 for the beta.

Mea Culpa (1/1)

Comments

[coolbreeze1.livejournal.com]

That was excellent. I really liked Sheppard's descent into anger then numbness and revenge. It was kind of freaky but I thought you really captured his mindset well. And great that Teyla was there too - Sheppard's last anchor to sanity. Well done!

[kristen999.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I wanted to show while his mind goes numb to cope with what happened, he doesn't realize that he's NOT dealing with it, instead it triggers something deep inside and yes, I wanted Teyla there to keep him from going over the edge.