"Take These Wings and Learn to Fly" (1/1)

[kristen999]

Title:Take These Wings and Learn to Fly
Author: Kristen999
Prompt:In My Youth (Or my younger days)
Word Count; 3600
Rating: K +
Spoilers/Warnings: None
Summary: John's heart has always been in the air; he'd just like to keep the memories in his head.

Notes: I'm not in the military.I spent a lot of time on line studying aircraft, military backgrounds and procedures, but any mistakes are my own. I used some information gathered from "Smittywing's Post"

Written for the sga_genficathon. I thought I was going to tweak this but decided to leave it alone. Sorry for not putting it in my other post. Didn't mean to spam.

Thank you to wildcat88 for the beta. Special thanks to sharpes_hussy for answering all my questions!



Take These Wings and Learn to Fly (1/1)

Comments

[coolbreeze1.livejournal.com]

Very cool. I like the progression of John's career and learning how to fly all those different craft. I really loved the line: "John feels like a secret agent in between the mounds of extra paper work." Even secret agents have tedious job duties! Those little lines from the computer probing John's mind were perfect too. This wasn't just a recap of John's backstory - there was something sinister going on at the same time that made it totally intense. Great job!

[kristen999.livejournal.com]

Thank you, there was a bit going on here :-P I'm just glad I was able to get it all there. One thing I did learn was pilots DO have a ton of paperwork! No wonder John hates it.