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Date: 2012-01-13 11:56 pm (UTC)“Yes, I am here. Um...you need something?”
The field crackled from the android's proximity to it and for a second, Rodney thought Ten would walk right through it. “It is Fur.”
“Fur?” Rodney searched for the android's furry companion, spotting a lump where Ten had been sitting.
“He has eaten very little the last few days and now he will not get up.”